Friday, April 17, 2020

Writing

For writing this week we wrote a story about a hide and seek experience we have. We also had to write about our senses.
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  1. Mrs CostelloApril 21, 2020 at 9:11 AM

    Hi Jacob

    This is a fantastic piece of descriptive writing! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I was truly gripping my seat as you built the suspense during the story. I wasn't quite sure if you were going to be found or manage to make your escape. Well done! Great use a language through out the story.

    I hope things are going well at home and you are enjoying the online learning. Its a bit different for us all!
    Keep up the great work, I look forward to reading more of your work while we are all working from home!

    Talk again soon

    Mrs Costello :)

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